Poslao: 09 Jul 2012 21:12
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- saten
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Dakle ovako, ja ću pisati sastave, a potrebni su mi oni koji bi bili voljni da isprave moje greške bilo gramatičke, bilo leksičke prirode.
Evo prvi sastav:
Living in a house or a flat
*There comes the time when one should decide if they would live in a house or in a flat. Although living in a flat has its advantages, living in a house can be more pleasant and benefitial.
*There are several advantages of living in a house. First, the house is usually larger than a flat, so it would be more comfortable for a bigger family to live in it. Also, when you live in the house, there aren’t those grumpy neighbours who would complain on the noise coming from your house. Also, if you happen to live in a house, you’d probably have a garden and be able to keep a pet.
*On the other side, there are disadvantages of living in a house. First of all, you would spend more time and energy on cleaning a house. Moreover, since there is plenty of space, you’d pay higher taxes and bills. Also, it would be very risky for a grandma to live in it, especially if there are the stairs she could trip on and break her arm.
*These reasons should help a person to make a decision whether or not they would live in a house.
PS. Stavila sam zvezdicu kod svakog izdvojenog pasusa.
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Registruj se da bi učestvovao u diskusiji. Registrovanim korisnicima se NE prikazuju reklame unutar poruka.
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Poslao: 09 Jul 2012 22:42
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Evo imaš jednog dobrovoljca
Sad sam na poslu pa ne mogu, ali pogledaću kad se vratim kući.
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Poslao: 10 Jul 2012 07:25
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Tu sam i ja, bacicu pogled occasionally.
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Poslao: 10 Jul 2012 13:21
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Koliko reci treba da bude otprilike?
Ja znam da kod nas traze tako oko *180-200* reci.
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Poslao: 10 Jul 2012 18:50
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Citat:when one should decide if they would live
Zar je moguca ovakva konstrukcija?
Zamerka je sto je u naslovu house i flat, a ti si pisala samo cons & pros za house. Flat-a nema nigde.
Elem, cini mi se da za stanove do 4 sprata nema lifta, pa mozes i to uzeti kao argument ZA kucu.
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