Napravi priču....

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Napravi priču....

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Ovo je jedna, tako reći igra u kojoj sastavljamo priče od pesama naših oviljenih izvođača.
Pravila:

1. Pesme mogu biti bilo kojeg žanra.
2. Tema priče je slobodna.
3. Priča mora biti napisana na jeziku na kojem je otpevana i korišćena pesma. (pesma na Engleskom = teks na engleskom)
4. Mogu se smenjivati izvođači.
5. Potrudite se da priča ima radnju, poruku i sve ono što bi trebala jedna priča da ima.
6. Svako ima pravo da učestvuje.
7. Dozvoljeno je da jedan član foruma napiše jedan deo priče, a da drugi nastavi.

pa, da počnemo Smile



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One day, a girl was taking a walk down the Boulevard of Broken Dreams, in the middle of Bat Country, a Land of the Dead. She was alone her entire life, which is sad but true. She was abused as little, but she knew she had to move on. Her mother was never around, blinded by ignorance, not knowing that her husband was a sick person. The girl became a freak on a leash, blinded in chains. She decided to execute her daddy. She took the gun and shoot him. She collected broken pieces of her soul and left behind everyting. She started an eternal nightquest, looking for her own path in the night. She stopped at the cemetery gates. She saw dancing dead. One of them came and said "Would you dance with me?"
She said yes.
"Would you join me in death?" he asked after a while.
"Forgive me, but I think it's not a good day to die."
So she left.
Whispers in the dark were telling her that she is a monster and should stay with the dead.
But, she didin't want to fall into the supermassive black hole - she wanted to feel awake and alive. So she persuaded her journey.



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Last month, when i went to school, i was surprised. One young girl walked in class. She was beautiful. I meant "All I want is you". Then, she sad "I am your new teacher". I didn't listen her, i watched and some of my thoughts crossed my mind. One of that thoughts was "teacher i need you". After class, i talked to her and called her out. We had fun together. I went to her house and said "There will never be another tonight". That was love on first sight. We talked. That was beautiful time. School wasn't meter. I loved her, she loved me. But than, something happened. And she left Sad . I was sad.
You are asking now, what happened. Well, she cheated on me. I sent letter to her.
letter ::
That ain't love honey...


greske u gramatici, prijavite mi preko pp-a. Hvala Smile

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A nisi se usudio da nastaviš moju priču? Mr. Green
Ali ja ću nastaviti tvoju Mr. Green

"What you want?" she asked rudely the next day.
"How can you be so cold? Are you made of stone? I love you..." I said, barely keeping my frozen tears in my eyes.
Than I saw that she was smilling like a killer.
"Open your eyes, boy" she said.
I felt so lost. Everything she wanted was to hurt me.
That day I promised myself that was the last time anyone played with my heart.

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ti si suvise hardcore za mene Wink

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p.s. Uglavnom sam koristila gothic grupe, možda ti se i svide pesme koje sam koristila... Smile

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Juice je SAM, rekao je da voli ribe u BIKINIJU ,na sve kritike rekao je samo REPUJEMO ,pricao nam je KAKO JE U BECU ,vozio je BELOG GROMA ,pokrenuo je njegov BIZNIS, uglavnom je sve to radio iz NAVIKE ,a svim jebenim hejterima je rekao BRATE MINLI ----CUTI DOK TE KARAM.......!! Very Happy

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Molila bih te da linkuješ pesme kao što smo to uradili mi, pošto ne umemo da gledamo u pasulj i pogađamo koje su pesme u pitanju. Confused

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Nisam dugo na forumu i ne umem da linkujem. Molio bih da mi objasnis kako? Neutral

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