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Sunrays

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Sunrays

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Mad_Zec Poslao: 22 Okt 2004 08:49 Idi na vrh
offline Mad_Zec Black Rabbit Pridružio: 03 Apr 2004 Poruke: 4513 Gde živiš: Novi Sad	0Niko još nije pohvalio poruku. Registruj se da bi pohvalio/la poruku! Sunrays Every day I walked to the market. I walked through the park. Just because I wanted so. Just because I liked it a lot. I liked to feel the sunrays on me. One day I decided that I don`t want to go on the market. One day I decided that I wanna feel the sun. I simply layed down on the ground. It felt nice so I kept laying there. While sunrays shined on me. I gave them my mind. I gave them my heartbeat. Day passed, night came. But still I liked laying there. I ignored couples that went into the bushes. So they could have their share of sex. I Ignored junkies that went into the bushes. So they could have their dose there. People started looking at me more and more. Somebody touched me and said "there is no pulse". And suddenly flashing lights and people around me. I can feel their fingers on me. I can feel them pressing me. I can feel electricity going through me. Trying to take my heartbeat. Trying to take my mind. They all are angry Only because I gave my heartbeat to the sun. Only because I gave my mind to the sun. And I dont want to give it to them. It is just for the sun and nobody else. They can shock me. They can hit me. They can blow in me. But they can`t have it. My heartbeat is just for the sun. My mind is just for the sun. They all look disapointed as I lay there not giving them anything. I see one guy getting a dark bag. I stand up as they all are shocked. Impossible I hear them say. But how there is no heartbeat they all ask me. They start touching me suddenly. All they say it is impossible. I simply pushed them all away. If you all want to give away your heartbeat and mind go ahead. But I will give it only who I want. And be what I want. Cause that is what I want. And there is no way that any of you will convince me diffrent. I told them clearly They all starred at me stunned as I showed them the finger. They all starred at me stunned as I walked away from them. And only letting morning sun to feel my heartbeat. Letting it to feel my mind. by Mad Zec

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Peca Poslao: 22 Okt 2004 14:42 Idi na vrh
offline Peca Glavni Administrator Predrag Damnjanović SysAdmin i programer Pridružio: 17 Apr 2003 Poruke: 23212 Gde živiš: Niš	0Niko još nije pohvalio poruku. Registruj se da bi pohvalio/la poruku! svidja mi se, mada mislim da bi mnogo lepse izgledalo da je na srpskom... jednostavno ne mogu da se 'uzivim' u poeziji na engleskom...

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_OljA_ Poslao: 23 Okt 2004 01:36 Idi na vrh
offline _OljA_ Građanin Pridružio: 09 Maj 2004 Poruke: 181 Gde živiš: Banjaluka	0Niko još nije pohvalio poruku. Registruj se da bi pohvalio/la poruku! Meni se bas svidja sto je na engleskom. Dobro odradjena pjesma. Svaka cast!

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Mad_Zec Poslao: 23 Okt 2004 07:39 Idi na vrh
offline Mad_Zec Black Rabbit Pridružio: 03 Apr 2004 Poruke: 4513 Gde živiš: Novi Sad	0Niko još nije pohvalio poruku. Registruj se da bi pohvalio/la poruku! Nekako mi je lakse bilo da se izrazim na engleskom i da sve to "osetim" na engleskom...

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Peca Poslao: 23 Okt 2004 12:35 Idi na vrh
offline Peca Glavni Administrator Predrag Damnjanović SysAdmin i programer Pridružio: 17 Apr 2003 Poruke: 23212 Gde živiš: Niš	0Niko još nije pohvalio poruku. Registruj se da bi pohvalio/la poruku! sledeci put kada se budemo videli, pricacemo na engleskom, samo da znas

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Vodolija Poslao: 23 Okt 2004 13:18 Idi na vrh
offline Vodolija Legendarni građanin Pridružio: 24 Feb 2004 Poruke: 3013	0Niko još nije pohvalio poruku. Registruj se da bi pohvalio/la poruku! Peca ::svidja mi se, mada mislim da bi mnogo lepse izgledalo da je na srpskom... jednostavno ne mogu da se 'uzivim' u poeziji na engleskom... Nesto ni meni ne ide da se "uzivim" u poeziji na engleskom,...moguce jer ne znam engleski

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Mad_Zec Poslao: 23 Okt 2004 19:30 Idi na vrh
offline Mad_Zec Black Rabbit Pridružio: 03 Apr 2004 Poruke: 4513 Gde živiš: Novi Sad	0Niko još nije pohvalio poruku. Registruj se da bi pohvalio/la poruku! @ Vodolija Ako zelis pokusacu da ti specijalno pokusam prevesti na srpski pa poslati na pm ali ne mogu nista da obecam, inace moja pesma po meni najbolja na engleskom je "Book", probaj kod nje da se uzivis... @ Peca What did you said?

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Gost Poslao: 27 Okt 2004 17:07 Idi na vrh
offline Gost	0Niko još nije pohvalio poruku. Registruj se da bi pohvalio/la poruku! Well done old chap! Don't let them get you! Don't let anybody get you! Freedom and individuality are the key for peace of mind!

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