neka druga vrsta pesama

neka druga vrsta pesama

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ovu pesmu ovakve vrste sam prvu napisao... ima jos takvih, ali vecini treba muzicka pratnja Wink

The Chosen One


You Are
You Are
The Chosen One
The Chosen One

Now it's a time to curn you around
Now it's a time when you were found
To go to the place
Next to the well
You are now cursed inside of this spell

You Are
You Are
The Chosen One
The Chosen One

Primitive swords covered with blood
It's not a time to playing God
You have to go
Next to the well
You need to released of this kind of spell

You Are
You Are
The Chosen One
The Chosen One

The Chosen One
Now you became
Fight for the Good want be same
Evil has now go to it's way
We will see how long will stay
Until the Chosen One
Go to the well
And evil witch throw a spell
And the Chosen One
Will still go around
Until the evil clan
Put him on ground

You Are
You Are
The Chosen One
The Chosen One


Silence Of The Death


[Talking...]
Every word you tell
Every lie you lied
Every way to Hell
Everything you tried

Now it's the midnight
I'm on the cemetery alone
I'm loosing my sight
I was sleeping at my home
'til I had the worse nightmare
Saying my first prayer
And hoping that the God will answer
But all I hear in that time
Is just a sound of slime
Until the next time I hear the scream
But it's

Silence of the death
Silence of the death
Silence of the death
Silence of the death

First time on the cemetery I have the fears
Expecting my holy son
And from my eyes just come out the tears
When approaches the Chosen One
And the holy man starts to preach
When my son trying to reach
To reach the shrine
And gave him a glass of wine
And a glass of a blood
In front of the eyes of God
And my son became the Chosen One
Silence Of The Death
It shall be done

Silence of the death
Silence of the death
Silence of the death
Silence of the death



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Ovo je neverovatno!!! Pesme su COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!! Imaju be po 5-6 gramatickih gresaka, ali su fe-no-me-nal-ne! Hoces da ti napisem ispravke, mislim gramaticke???
P.S. Koliko imas godina?



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hvala, hvala... znam da ima gramatickih gresaka. napisi ih slobodno



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To bi islo ovako:
The Chosen One


You Are
You Are
The Chosen One
The Chosen One

Now it's a time to curn you around
Now it's a time when you were found
To go to the place
Next to the well
You are now cursed inside of this spell

You Are
You Are
The Chosen One
The Chosen One

Primitive swords covered with blood
It's not a time FOR playing God
You have to go
Next to the well
You need to release this kind of spell

You Are
You Are
The Chosen One
The Chosen One

The Chosen One
Now you became
Fight for the Good wOn't be same
Evil has now goNE to it's way
We SHAll see how long will stay
Until the Chosen One
GoES to the well
And evil witch throwS a spell
And the Chosen One
Will still go around
Until the evil clan
PutS him on THE ground

You Are
You Are
The Chosen One
The Chosen One


Silence Of The Death


[Talking...]
Every word you tell
Every lie you lied
Every way to Hell
Everything you tried

Now it's the midnight
I'm on the cemetery alone
I'm loosing my sight
I was sleeping at my home
'til I had the worse nightmare
Saying my first prayer
And hoping that the God will answer
But all I hearD in that time
WAS just a sound of slime
Until the next time I hear the scream
But it's

Silence of the death
Silence of the death
Silence of the death
Silence of the death

First time on the cemetery, I have the fears
Expecting my holy son
And from my eyes just cAme out the tears
When approaches the Chosen One |||- ovo ne bi moglo da zadrzi ovaj redosled, treba prvo WHEN, pa LIK, pa GLAGOL...???|||
And the holy man starts to preach
When my son IS trying to reach
To reach the shrine
And I gave him a glass of wine
And a glass of blood
In front of the eyes of God
And my son became the Chosen One
Silence Of The Death
It shall be done

Silence of the death
Silence of the death
Silence of the death
Silence of the death

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hvala na ispravkama... neke sam i ja primetio, nesto nisam znao... u svakom slucaju hvala...

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