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Chezhnja na japanski nachin...

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"Snovi, chujte, snovi!
Ne sjedinjujte me
S chovekom koga volim –
Jer kad se probudim
Tako sam usamljena."


(anonimna japanska pesnikinja iz X veka)


"Tri godine mislio je na nju,
pet godina cheznuo je za njom
– samo mu je jedne noci bila u naruchju."


(popularna japanska ulichna pesma, u formi haiku-a)



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Trešnjin cvet
ima draž
i kad crvena
trešnja postane



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Nevidjeni narcis. Vise gledam svoj haiku pokušaj od tvojih, japanskih, stihova. Bez veze. Dobijam želju da obrišem. Ipak ne. Haiku, i tako ne trpi razmišljanje. Napišeš kao što udahneš vazduh i kraj.............čekaš novi udisaj.



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"Night; and once again,
the while I wait for you, cold wind
turns into rain."


(Shiki, Masaoka, 1867-1902)


Dopuna: 09 Maj 2005 21:55


"I go
and you remain -
two autumns."

"chrysanthemum's scent
in the garden a worn-out sandal
just the sole"

"No blossoms and no moon,
and he is drinking sake
all alone!"

"Won't you come and see
loneliness? Just one leaf
from the kiri tree."


"Harvest moon:
around the pond I wander
and the night is gone."

"Temple bells die out.
The fragrant blossoms remain.
A perfect evening!"



(Matsuo Basho)

Dopuna: 16 Okt 2005 4:01


"I caught a petal fallen from cherry tree in my hand.
Opening the fist
I find nothing there."


(Kyoshi Takahama, 1874-1959)

* * *


"Sam sam zagledan u mesec,
sam dok o sebi razmishljam,
sam zamishljen nad ovim mojim bednim zhivotom.
Hoccu da viknem da sam sam,
ali niko ne pita kako mi je."



"Mrachi se more.
Jedva su beli krici
divljih pataka."



"Godine prolaze.
Na licu majmuna
maska majmuna."

* * *


"Sunce se naglo dizhe
uz miris cvetova shljive
duzh planinske staze."



"Dok se uspravljaju
hrizanteme blago mirishu
posle kishnih poplava."


* * *


"Izustish li rech
usne se naglo slede –
jesenji vetar."


"Zimska osama:
u jednobojnom svetu
glasanje vetra."


"Mesec za horizont zadje:
sve shto ostade:
chetiri ugla stola."



(Matsuo Basho, 1644-1694)


About Basho:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Matsuo_Basho


"Every day is a journey, and the journey itself is home."

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Obozavam haiku

Koliko znam, pravilan haiku se pise 5-7-5, zar ne?

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Covered with the flowers,
Instantly I'd like to die
In this dream of ours!


Etsujin


Behold the ego
Set in glowing emptiness
On the edge of time.


Noel Kaufman

[edit by Black Orchid - obrisan duplirani haiku]

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Evo moje, sad na brzinu:

Krosnje drveca
Vetar mrsi ti kosu
Grad je siv

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Leggy ::Obozavam haiku

Koliko znam, pravilan haiku se pise 5-7-5, zar ne?


Da... Smile Mada je chak vishe vazhnije da bude ukupno 17 slogova, nego kako su rasporedjeni, a chak i od toga se mozhe malo odstupiti Cool Ali, da, klasichna forma je 5-7-5...
Evo ovde neshto vishe o "pravilima" haiku poezije (pravilo je da nema pravila Mr. Green ), davnije sam post-ovala...
-> http://www.mycity.rs/phpbb/viewtopic.php?p=40335&highlight=#40335

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Orhideja svaki put ubode nešto dobro. Svaka čast.

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"I kill an ant
and realize my three children
have been watching."

(Kato, Shuson 1905-1993)


"This is my final dwelling,
buried now in five-foot snow."


"In the Summer Evening,
Where is My Star
Hidden in the Milky Way?"


"Blossoms at night,
and the faces of people
moved by music."


(Issa, Kobayashi, 1763-1828-)


"Koliko god da je tvoja poezija rechita,
ako tvoj oseccaj nije prirodan -
ako ste objekat i ti razdvojeni -
tvoja poezija nije istinska poezija,
vec samo subjektivna krivotvorina...
Haiku je naprosto ono shto se dogadja
na ovom mestu, u ovaj chas."


(Matsuo Basho)


"Dan u kojem ne lutam, ne pijem
sake i ne pishem haiku
za mene je promashen."



"Real haiku is the soul of poetry. Anything that is not actually present in one's heart is not haiku. The moon glows, flowers bloom, insects cry, water flows. There is no place we cannot find flowers or think of the moon. This is the essence of haiku. Go beyond the restrictions of your era, forget about purpose or meaning, separate yourself from historical limitations - there you'll find the essence of true art, religion, and science."

(Taneda Santoka, 1882-1940)


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"To learn how to die
watch cherry blossoms, observe
chrysanthemums"


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