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The eternal story that powerfully explores the capacity for love that stirs the human heart, and illuminates the opulent society as it was imperial Russia. The action takes place 1874th years. The lively and beautiful, Anna Karenina has everything that the women would envy her for that time, she was a woman Karenina, high government officials who gave birth to a son, and her position in the society of St. Petersburg could not be higher. She will travel to Moscow when he receives a letter from his brother Oblonskog, which begs Anna to come over and help him to save his marriage with Dolly. In this way, Anna will meet the Countess Vronsky, to be at the station to welcome son, enthusiastic cavalry officer Vronsky. When Anu familiar with Vronsky, including sevnuti will immediately spark that neither he nor she will not be able to ignore.

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Pozdrav.

Evo mog razmišljanja, koje ne mora biti tačno:

citat ::The action takes place 1874th years.
The action takes place in 1874. / The action takes place in 1870s.
citat ::The lively and beautiful, Anna Karenina has...
Ja bih bez the.
citat :: ... she was a woman Karenina, high government officials who gave birth to a son...
... she was a woman of Karenin, high government official, who ...
citat ::She will travel to Moscow when he receives a letter from his brother Oblonskog, which begs Anna ...
when she;his brother Oblonsky; who begs Anna ...
citat ::When Anu familiar with Vronsky, including sevnuti will immediately spark that neither he nor she will not be able to ignore.
When she gets introduced to Vronsky, a spark of love appears immediately, that neither he nor she will be able to ignore.

Takođe, možda bi bilo bolje da se umesto future tense na pojedinim mestima, stavi present simple.

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@Mila I: Nije lepo iznositi neistinite informacije i tudji rad predstavljati kao sopstveni. Ovaj "tvoj" prevod je 99.99% prevod koji si dobila pomocu Google translate, uz mogucnost (onih 0.01%) da je u pitanju neki drugi program za prevodjenje.

Mila l ::When Anu familiar with Vronsky, including sevnuti will immediately spark that neither he nor she will not be able to ignore.
Nijedan covek nece ostaviti rec iz originalnog jezika u sred prevoda. To rade samo programi kad nemaju adekvatan prevod.

Kad smo vec kod originalnog teksta, ovo je najava za film "Ana Karenjina", jel tako?
http://www.city.ba/dogadjaji/kino-predstave/6808-ana-karenjina

Citat:Priča koja moćno istražuje sposobnost za ljubav koja uzburkava ljudsko srce, dok rasvjetljava raskošno društvo kakvo je bilo carska Rusija. Radnja se dešava 1874. godine. Živahna i lijepa, Ana Karenjina (Keira Knightley) ima sve ono na čemu bi joj pozavidjele žene iz tog doba; ona je žena Alekseja Karenjina (Jude Law), visokog vladinog činovnika kome je rodila sina, i njen položaj u društvu Sankt Peterburga ne može biti viši. Kad dobije pismo od svog brata Oblonskog, u kome je moli da dođe i pomogne mu da spasi njegov brak s Doli, Ana će otputovati u Moskvu. Na tom putu, Ana upoznaje groficu Vronski, koju će na željezničkoj stanici dočekati sin, zanosni konjički oficir Vronski (Aaron Taylor-Johnson). Kad Anu upoznaju s Vronskim, među njima će odmah sijevnuti varnica koju ni on ni ona neće moći da ignorišu.
Ako zelis da se neko potrudi da ti pomogne, prvo se ti potrudi da uradis nesto sama.

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