pomoc - prepricavanje teksta

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Molim za pomoc ako neko ima volje.Imam sutra kontrolni iz englskog i trebam ukratko da prepricam tekst.Unapred priznajem nemam pojma da ptrepricavam.Osudite me ali ako mozete i pomozite.Unapred zahvalan.

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ok, ali koji tekst?

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Ne. On hoće da neko sa foruma prepriča i to prevede na engl.

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Da, ali sta da se preprica i prevede?? kako da mu pomognem ako ne znam sta hoce.

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Citat:Unapred priznajem nemam pojma da ptrepricavam.Osudite me ali ako mozete i pomozite.Unapred zahvalan.

Buduci da nije postavio tekst i da ne zna da prepricava, najbolji nacin da mu se pomogne je da mu se najednostavnije obrazlozi proces prepricavanja na engleskom. Mcrule, prepustam ti to, toj je u tvom domenu.

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Napisano: 26 Jan 2012 23:09

Ljudiii,, molim vas ,hitno mi treba prepricati ovaj tekst, tekst je razumljiv i nije tezak,al ja ne znam bas dobro pricati engleski,gramatika me zbunjuje,,pa bi vas zamolila, ako mozete ,,da mi neko preprica ,ko zna,a zna vas dosta sigurno.Uglavnom ne treba tu nest puno prepricavati,,samo najvaznije,,sustinsko.
Molim vas Unaprijed hvala

WALKING BACK (EVEREST BLOG)
Day 1-Am I mad?
I first heard of " Show Racism the Red Card" when a friend asked me to sign a petition supporting their work.Basically it's an organisation which uses professional footballers to help fight racism in sport and society.I liked the idea,so i signed. A few weeks later , he asked me if i wanted to do a bit more for them.I thought he probably meant make a donation or do some voluntary work.But when he told me that a group of about 20 people were getting sponsored to play the highest ever game of rugby at 5,140 meters on the slopes of Mount Everest.Well, to cut a long story short,tomorrow i'm off to Nepal.Wish me luck.

Day 4- Uphill all the way
We're making our up to the base camp -that's where most climbers start their final ascent to the top - and then,we'll play our game.There's one thingh I've learned pretty quickly .If you walk too fast at high altitude,you get really short of breath.There's not much oxygen, and you have to do everything slowly.Today we started out at 8am.We had to cross three suspension bridges.One of them was so high you couldn't see the bottom.Then we walked through some beautful forest areas before we started a two-hours uphill hike to Namche Bazaar.It was really tough and most of us had headaches when we arrived. Tomorrow we're going to have a rest day.I need one!

Day 5- A welcome rest
Today,I'm wondering why I always do things the hard way.I mean most people go on demonstration or hand out leaflets in the High Street if they want to help out,but me - no. I have to go up Mount Everest and play a game of rugby.Anyway,today was a day off so I went into town and bought a monkey hat and a blanket for my sleeping bag. We're surrounded by mountains here - it's beautiful.I took lots of photos.If I have time later, I'll upload some of them onto the blog, so you can all see where I am.

Day 10 - On top of the world
Base camp is basically just a lot of stones and tents.The walk up was really exhausting.maybe if I was fitter,I wouldn't find this so hard,but then it's not just me -all of us get very short of breath.We passed two crashed helicopters just to show you how dangerous Everest can be. One of them crashed only two days ago.No one was killed,luckily.

Day 11- The game
Today we played our game.It was supposed to be a "friendly",and last night ,we had agreed we'd just walk and not run.However, it got competitive and two players were even sent off.We only played for 14 minutes.I think someone would have got hurt if we'd played any longer! My team won and I scored the last try! Of course, none of this matters.What's really important is that we did it and we've raised a load of money.It feels amazing.

Dopuna: 26 Jan 2012 23:28

ljudiiii ,odoh spavatii,,a nadam se da ce mi neko do sutra vece to prepricati tekst WALKEING BACK koji sam napisala malopre ..jos jednom vas molim. :d hvala

Dopuna: 26 Jan 2012 23:44

i da jos jedna napomena.. ko mi bude prepricao nek mi posalje na mejl (sekan.93@hotmail.com) Molim vas Dobre duse ,,smilujte se

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Zasto niko nece da mi preprica ovaj gore tekst WALKING BACK? pa hajde ljudiiii ,toliko vas je na forumu,,to je 10 minuta,,za vas koji znate

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Day 1

After I had heard about "Show Racism the Red Card", a friend of mine asked me to sign their petition and I did it. It's an organization which fights against racism in sport but society as well, so I wanted to support their activity. A few weeks later, I was asked to join a group of about 20 people who were supposed to play the highest ever game of rugby, on Mount Everest. I joined them.

Day 4

The fourth day we were climbing the base camp. It was the last place before getting the top where we would play our game. Our way to the top was exhausting. There was lack of oxygen over there and we had to do everything slowly so that not to get short of breath. We also had to get through three suspension bridges and some forest areas before our two-hour hike to Namche Bazaar. After getting the top (mozda bi moglo i 'having got' ? A mozda i ne bi ... ), it was planned to have a day off.

Day 5

I am wondering if I had to do this. There are many other ways to help people instead of climbing Mount Everest. Anyway, I have a chance to see marvelous nature. I have taken a lot of photos and I am planning to upload a few of them onto the blog.

Day 10

Base camp is nothing else but lots of stones and tents. We made a lot of effort on our way up. One of the main problems was lack of oxygen.
We also had the opportunity to see how dangerous Everest can be by passing two crashed helicopters.

Day 11

The day we played the game. It should have been a friendly one but eventually got a competitive character. The game lasted about 14 minutes. Nobody was hurt and I scored the last try. In the end, nothing was important but that we gathered a load of money.

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Izvinite jel moze neko da mi preprica knjigu umetnost prijateljstva.Hvala

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