Mala pomoć oko ispravke teksta na sajtu

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Radim sajt na engleskom i veći deo teksta sam više ili manje solidno sastavio. Ipak imam paragrafa koje sam napisao, ali mi ružno zvuče i nisam siguran da su baš najbolje napisani i razumljivi.

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Hteo sam da platim nekoga da mi pregleda sve na sajtu, ali kontam da je samo ovaj tekst malo problematičan i da će se valjda naći neko da mi pomogne. Nadam se da ima neko ko dobro govori engleski, jer moj nije baš savršen.

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Napisano: 04 Apr 2012 2:04

Pregledah na brzinu i uocih ovo:

log in to your
//ubaci "to"

informations
//izbaci s

Neke delove bih preformulisao (da li treba biti sktriktno formalno?).

Dopuna: 04 Apr 2012 2:05

opet procitah i videh malo problema sa clanovima. Ispravice neko, odoh na qnt.

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Treba da izgleda što ozbiljnije/profesionalnije

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Balkanac82 ::Treba da izgleda što ozbiljnije/profesionalnije

Onda se trebaju izbeci skraceni oblici (it's --> it is i slicno).
A vidim da je bluewortex to vec "integrisao" u svojoj ispravci

edit:

vidim da su popravljeni i clanovi

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Ljudi hvala. To sam ubacio na sajt, ali je ostao još jedan manji deo koji ste možda prevideli.

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Koliko ja vidim, taj deo je OK.
Nema gresaka.

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