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Sastav o Beogradu

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Ne, neću nikoga moliti da mi piše sastav... Ali ću zamoliti da mi neko proveri da li je dobro. Sastav nije za ocenu, ali ja bih ipak volela da vidim da li je to iole dobro... I još nešto, u sastavu su samo neki podaci o Beogradu. Ne svi...

Belgrade

Belgrade is a capital city of Serbia. It lies in mouth Danube and Sava. It has a population over three million people. Belgrade is city with very interesting histori. It was formed bz Celts in the third centuary BC, and it was called Singidunum. During the tam, it has changed name in Beligrad. Officialy, Belgrade became capital city in 1403.
Todaz, Belgrade has 17 municipaties. They are: Barajevo, Voždovac, Vračar, Grocka, Zvezdara, Zemun, Lazarevac, Mladenovac, Novi Beograd, Obrenovac, Palilula, Rakovica, Savski venac, Sopot, Stari grad, surčin and Čukarica.
It is the sity of business, economics, culture and education.
If you come to Belgrade, you must visit a few festival like BITEF,BELEF,BEMUS. You should also visit Avala, Naradno pozorište, Kalemegdan,Nacionalna biblioteka. Belgrade is beautiful and large city with a lot of opportunities...
Belgrade has continental climate, a verage temperature is 5 degrees C in winter, and 24 degrees in summer.
It is easy to travel between Belgrade and the rest of Serbia. There are regular international flights too.
Belgrade is worth seeing...



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saten ::Ne, neću nikoga moliti da mi piše sastav... Ali ću zamoliti da mi neko proveri da li je dobro. Sastav nije za ocenu, ali ja bih ipak volela da vidim da li je to iole dobro... I još nešto, u sastavu su samo neki podaci o Beogradu. Ne svi...

Belgrade

Belgrade is the capital of Serbia. It lays on the mouth of Sava and Danube. It has a population of over three million. Belgrade is the city with a very interesting history. It was formed by the Celts in the third century BC, and it was called Singidunum then. During the course of time, it changed its name in Belgrade (White City). Officially, Belgrade became Serbian capital in 1403.
Today, Belgrade has 17 municipalities: Barajevo, Voždovac, Vračar, Grocka, Zvezdara, Zemun, Lazarevac, Mladenovac, Novi Beograd, Obrenovac, Palilula, Rakovica, Savski venac, Sopot, Stari grad, Surčin and Čukarica.
It is the city of business, economics, culture and education.
If you come to Belgrade, you must try and to visit a few festivals, like BITEF, BELEF, BEMUS. You should also visit Avala, Narodno pozorište (National theatre), Kalemegdan, Nacionalna biblioteka (National Library). Belgrade is a beautiful and big city, with lots of opportunities.
Belgrade has a continental climate, with average temperature of 5 degrees Centigrade in winter, and 24 degrees in summer.
It is easy to travel between Belgrade and the rest of Serbia. There are regular international flights too.
Belgrade is worth seeing...



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Zašto must to try and to visit? Wink

Dopuna: 07 Nov 2008 10:38

Tamo gde je z umesto y greška je dok sam kucala...

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Nije loš tekst, dobre su i ispravke! Evo, ja ću jos koju stvarčicu dodati što mislim da je ili greškica (uglavnom dosadni "a" i "the"!) ili da bi dodatno poboljšao tekst:

Belgrade

Belgrade is the capital of Serbia. It lies on the mouth of the rivers Sava and Danube. It has a population of over three million. Belgrade is a city with a very interesting history. It was founded by the Celts in the third century BC, and it was called Singidunum then. During the course of time, it changed its name to Belgrade (White City). Officially, Belgrade became the Serbian capital in 1403. (ili Belgrade officially became the Serbian capital in 1403.)
Today, Belgrade has 17 municipalities: Barajevo, Voždovac, Vračar, Grocka, Zvezdara, Zemun, Lazarevac, Mladenovac, Novi Beograd, Obrenovac, Palilula, Rakovica, Savski Venac, Sopot, Stari Grad, Surčin and Čukarica. (lično se još uvek malo dvoumim šta da radim kad je npr. "Stari grad", ali mislim da je ipak pravilnije na engleskom da se piše Stari Grad, sa sve velikim početnim slovima)

Citat:It is a city of business, economics, culture and education.
If you come to Belgrade, you must try and (greškom je pisalo i "to" i "and") visit a few festivals, like BITEF, BELEF, BEMUS. You should also visit Avala, Narodno pozorište (the National theatre), Kalemegdan, and Nacionalna biblioteka (the National Library). Belgrade is a beautiful and big city, with lots of opportunities.
Belgrade has a continental climate, with an average temperature of 5 degrees Centigrade in winter, and 24 degrees in summer.
It is easy to travel between Belgrade and the rest of Serbia. There are regular international flights too.
Belgrade is worth seeing...


Inače, da odam jednu tajnu, moja firma je prošle godine kompletan sajt Turističke organizacije Beograda prevela na engleski, pa imate sve ovo tamo! Ovaj tekst imam osećaj da sam preveo jedno 10 puta! Smile (http://www.tob.rs/eng/index.php?option=com_content&task=view&id=18&Itemid=121)

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- Englezi kazu "you must try and to do something", to je vise kao izraz, nije bila greska.
- Za ovo lies sam greskom pomislio da je "lagati" pa sam po inerciji napisao onako.
- U recenici "Belgrade is a city with a very interesting history" bilo bi "a" da je ta recenica prva u tekstu i da se Beograd pre toga nije pominjao, ovako bih pre stavio "the".

Za sve ostalo se slazem Smile

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MoscowBeast ::- Englezi kazu "you must try and to do something", to je vise kao izraz, nije bila greska.

- U recenici "Belgrade is a city with a very interesting history" bilo bi "a" da je ta recenica prva u tekstu i da se Beograd pre toga nije pominjao, ovako bih pre stavio "the".

Za sve ostalo se slazem Smile


Samo da dam repliku Smile

Prvo, ako ti nešto znači, što se tiče ove dve primedbe, ja sam izvorni govornik engleskog, i ove varijante jednostavno „ne zvuče” tačne, šta god bilo objašnjenje! Znam, nije baš fer da to „potežem”, ali šta ću kad je tako! Pokušaću da objasnim zašto (što je uvek teže za izvorne govornike - lako nam je da se pravimo pametni Smile ):

- tačno je da postoji opcija "try AND do something" (koju puristi smatraju „pogrešnom”, a svakako je manje formalna), ili "try TO do something". Ali ne može i jedno i drugo. Evo jedno objašnjenje, gde se ne spominje varijanta "try and to": alt-usage-english.org/excerpts/fxtryand.html - sorry, ne može, trust me Smile

- razumem objašnjenje za član ali imaj u vidu da se imenica "BELGRADE" prethodno pominje, a ovde je reč o imenici „city”! Jeste da je taj "city" koji je u pitanju Beograd, ali to pravilo se strogo odnosi na samu imenicu (inače se nikad ne bi reklo "the Belgrade", ali o tome i ne pričamo). Dakle, "city" se u toj rečenici po prvi put uvodi. Tako da sled ide ovako (izmišljam sad), "Belgrade lies on the Danube. Belgrade is A beautiful city. THE city was founded... bla bla". Make sense? Da bi bilo "the city", moralo bi već da je pomenut city i da je on subjekat rečenice. Ovde je i dalje "Beograd" subjekat, pa bi jedino THE došlo u obzir u upotrebi tipa: "Belgrade is THE city with THE most beautiful...(popuni sam!)", a to je već drugo pravilo.

Inače, nisam baš tolika cepidlaka u životu, ali po ceo dan radim lekturu, korekturu i prevod na engleski, pa mi to dođe profesionalna deformacija - jače je od mene!

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Ok, ok, verujem na rec Smile Znaci moja je greska "to" posle "try and", sad kad citam vidim da ni sam ne bih tako rekao Smile A ovo za a i the - da je bilo pitanje na testu, garant bih pogresio. A ja se jos cudim sto mi dadose samo 7 na IELTSu... Mr. Green

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Ostale greške su mi jasne. Nego mi ono za try... No sve u svemu hvala Vam Wink

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Ma kul - pisani engleski je izuzetno težak. Super je ovo bilo, ali naravno, uvek se nešto potkrade. Svaka čast ko može da se pismeno izražava na engleskom ili da prevodi sa srpskog na engleski a da mu engleski nije maternji jezik.

Mogu da kažem da koliko god dobro znao srpski, nikad se ne bih usudio da uradim prevod sa engleskog na srpski za neke ozbiljnije svrhe, barem ne bez lekture...

Kad smo kod toga, i mnogi Englezi ne umeju da pišu na engleskom, što vas sigurno i neće toliko iznenaditi...

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Pretpostavila sam. Ali ja hoću da upišem engleski, a čula sam da moram da polažem i pisanje, pa moram malo da vežbam... Smile Još ću ja da gnjavim u to sam sigurna... Wink

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